Yo I can't believe you did something like this man ha ha!
I think you're really talented, and the production was aight, but the content was kinda mehhh... It's hard to take a subject like training a discipline and spit rhymes about it without sounding corny. The only cats I've ever seen do something like that right are Dead Prez and Wu-Tang Lupe Fiasco also did a good bit about skateboarding with "Kick Push" I think you need to do some research, cause rapping about techniques just comes off as corny. I don't want to discourage you, and in fact I wouldn't even post unless I thought there was somethin...